Monday, 1 October 2007

COMMENTS ON PEOPLE'S BLOG

Islamophobia said... HASNAA
WWW*Excellent research on the topic* Loads of Pictures and Videos which are analysed.* Good use of Delicious Links/Tags

EBI Maybe you could add in some bullet poin/too much wrting! (but that is good)XxNaziyaXX

AMRIT...

Islamophobia said...
WWW (what went well)* Good key points, which are short and snappy* Key concepts are short and handy, easy to refer back to.* Good Background information of the text

EBI More pictures can be added in and analysed and videos.

Dips

Islamophobia said...
WWW (what went well)* Good background iformation is provided about the text.* Pictures are also on your blog,makes it look visual and appealing.* Key concepts are put up, easy to refer back to.

EBI* Maybe you can add in some theorist about your idea?XxNaziyaXx

Pardeep

Islamophobia said...
WWW (What went well)* Good links of theorist you have put up, easy to refer back to.* Excellent in-dept study of the text.* Excellent background information, such as Interviews and newpaper articles.

EBI (Even better if)* You can probably get a few videos maybe 1 or 2 and just analyse them! XxNaziyaXx

Kirandeep

WWW (What went well)* Detail knowledge about the text* Loads of pictures which makes your blog look visual and appealing.* Background information in also provided.

EBI* You can add in a few video clips and analyse them, so that we the audience can get a insight into the text!XxNaziyaXx

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